I woke up suddenly by a thumping noise. I realized the sheets of my bed were completely drenched in sweat, but it felt like I saw something move inside the mirror. A face, white and pale in color, with hollow eyes and crimson fluid dripping from the vacant place once where was her eyes.
She placed her hand on the mirror and urged me to touch hers. It felt like she put me in a trance, and I touched the glass. The moment I did, everything went black. I saw my bf search for me after waking up to an empty bed. I called him but he was unable to hear me. No idea why I knocked on the surface before me, it was transparent and I could see him clearly but he couldn’t find me anywhere.
Cold fingers grasped my shoulder and turned me around, behind me stood the girl with no face, crimson fluid still dripping from hollow eyes. She slit my throat in one swift moment, left me on the ground, and vanished among the shadows.
I realized I was trapped in the mirror now, as she slit my throat every night from then on.
That’s scary… Reminded me of the film Mirrors..
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Now that I think of, kinda yes.
Shit 😉
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Horrible..
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hehe 😉
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That was some scary stuff! I love it when these horror stories end in a cycle. Like here, that faceless girl has you trapped in her cycle, killing you every night…Reading this was so awesome! Will there be a sequel?
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No Rach, but more similar posts are coming
❤ ❤ 🙂
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Cool!!😁❤
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😍♥️♥️
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😨😲
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My dear friend is spooked 😉 😉
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😊😊 Yep
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yayyyy ❤ ❤
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THATS SCARY!
I LOVED IT❤️.
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Thank youuu so much dr, means so much you got afraid 😉 😉
hehe
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This is so scary 😬 but that is success. 😂
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success as in?
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Mane you wrote a scary story and it scares everyone (and scared me a little more) so it’s success😁
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Ohh achha, actually it’s my fav genre to write about 😉 ❤
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Now I know. 😂 But I always like to read your stories, even if it scares me.
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More stuff like this coming soon dr 🙂
Stay tuned ❤ ❤
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Amazing blog!
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Thank you soo much, means a lot to me 🙂 🙂
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Spine-chilling! I froze.
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Yayy you got terrified 🤗🤗
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It’s everybody! Not just me.
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Then my job is done….for now 😉 😉
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Dark n beautifully scary💐
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heheh thank you 🙂
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You’re most welcome friend🌷💕
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Scary but interesting ..I wanted to read more 💜 hatsoff to your writing skills 💜
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Thanks yar, abhi to picture baki hai mere dost 😅😅❤️
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Ye hui na baat 😂💜 my pleasure girl 💜
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Hi!
This is a no obligation nomination 🙂 If you do wish to participate, there is no time limit whatsoever. I just wanted to show my appreciation to you and for your work.
https://thisdoorisalarmed.wordpress.com/2018/06/20/liebster-award-3
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You don’t have to be soo formal dr 😉
I will post it, and you will be the first to know ❤ ❤
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Hey:) Sorry, I sort of wrote the comment in bulk and pasted it (sorry, the awful ‘p’ word! XD there were some people I didn’t know as well on the list 🙂 *hugs*
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No need to apologize, ever dr 🙂 ❤ ❤
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😊😊😊😀 you are so sweet! 💜
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You too hon ❤ ❤ ❤
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😀😀😀
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Thats short yet says everything😊 nice work.
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Thank you 🙂 🙂
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I can’t wait for the continuation!
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I am indeed thinking about turning it into a more elaborate story 🙂
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Yes pls. 🙌😍 I soooo wanna read it. Anticipating!
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I love it. I couldn’t literally see it happening.
Boo, you rock ❤❤🔥💯
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you too boo, a lot ❤ ❤
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❤💯😘
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Eek, that is terrifying!
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Thank God, that’s what I wanted 😉 🙂 ❤
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This is so thrilling! Wonderful job, love your writings!
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Thank you Jesica 🙂
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Oh the Horror 😨😲
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thanks for getting scared 😉 😉
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That was really haunting. Kept me on the edge. You have really narrating skill. Good job!
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Thank you Rosy, I will write a big narrative on my next story ❤️
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Loved it 😍😍😍
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Dar nahi laga na 😅❤️❤️
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I can feel !! Tabhi toh I loved it ! This inspires me to write 🙋
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aww dhanyawad 😋❤️❤️
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Great scary story! Love the build up and then the ending which is not really an ending…as good horror rarely is!
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Thank you sooo much, wow that’s really sweet ❤ ❤
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Prettyyy intense. Brilliant work!
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Thanks Shruti, bahut din baad kuch aisa likha 🙂 🙂
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It’s really good. Such an interesting read 😊
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aww thanks yar 🙂 ❤ ❤
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Really good! Well done, Pia! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you Abhi 🙂 🙂
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Welcome. Perfect for a short horror film😊😊😊
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I really wanted it to be scary,raatko likhte waqt to hum hi udd gaye 🤣🤣
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Pretty scary. But silently without any dialogues only the psychology of the character and secluded environment will do the trick with no music except the surrounding sounds and breathing.
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you made it into a plot for a movie mayb, 🙂
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Yep. Very much in my mind😊😊😊
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Can I write a short script on this?
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Yes of course, I would love to read it Abhi
🙂
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Thank you, Pia. I will write one. 😊😊😊
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Intense. Well done.
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Terrifying ri8?
😉
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It was.
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😲😱😭
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Noo don’t get afraid dr 😉
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😁😁
I liked it 😉
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Thank God, ❤ ❤ ❤
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Wohoo!! Horror!!! Gr8 Di 🙂
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darr to nahi gaye naa 😉 🙂
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Naah naah!!! Jo darr gaya so mar gaya!!! 😀
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Scary!!!! Check out my new post!
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Thanks Sana 🤗❤️❤️
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I love your short stories, and I love your weekly prompts!!
So, I went and put you on my list for Liebster Awards!
http://seejaystark.com/ive-been-liebsterated/
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Aww thank you See Jay 🤗❤️
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You’re welcome, Pia! We’ll deserved!
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Woah! That’s scary.
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Hehe thanks yar
Don’t be afraid 🤗❤️❤️
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