Last year during summertime I visited my aunt’s place. I was enjoying myself to my extreme, away from all the homework and studying but then my visit took a ugly and petryfing turn.
I was heading towards the bathroom on the second floor when I saw my cousin Trisha playing on the stairs.She was very pretty and jolly and used to make funny faces, trying to imitate other people’s faces.
She was busy making a funny face while sitting on the stair. I asked her what she was doing. That little thing told me she was copying the woman with the braid.
I looked around there was no one but only us. I asked her where is the lady? She pointed towards the stairwell, upwards.
I asked her what is the lady doing right now? Trisha replied, making funny faces.
I started walking upwards the stairwell when suddenly Trisha said something which made me stop in my way.
The lady’s braid is around her neck.
I asked her what are you saying, repeat again.
Trisha said “the lady is hanging by her braid, making funny faces”.
Then Trisha started to copy that lady and I understood the face she was making, it was someone grasping for air.
oh my God! I remember exactly something like this. My little sister once said that there’s a witch on the other side of the door. It scared the shit out of me and I picked her up and ran to my mom. Lol. Btw, you’re Indian?
same story….
Actually my nephew is 2 yr old ..
when I’m alone playing with him in evening on the terrace ..
most of the time, he says that he’s seeing ghost 👻.. & acts like Sachi me dikh raha hai ..😒
usse pehle mujhe dar lagta hai 😛
Bhagke aa jata hun me niche😂
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oh my God! I remember exactly something like this. My little sister once said that there’s a witch on the other side of the door. It scared the shit out of me and I picked her up and ran to my mom. Lol. Btw, you’re Indian?
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Yes.
And that’s really terrifying 😓
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Probably shouldn’t have read this at 2:57 a.m. . . . gave me the chills! 😱. . . plus my hair is a . .so extra 😱 lol
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*my hair is in a braid
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Scary
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Very scary.😳😳
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Woah! This took an unexpected turn. Interesting read 😊
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Do tune in for more Nameera ❤️❤️
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Sure thing!
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Wow, excellently written!
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Aren’t you a sweetie, thanks yar 😄❤️❤️
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The way you have written it, portrays the horror of the moment perfectly. This is one brilliant piece.
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I meant it be frightening, m glad I could keep it up 🙂 🙂
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So creepy and scary! But your writing is excellent! It glues me in 🙂
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Aren’t you a peach, thank you pal 😍🌸🌸
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It’s got that spooky feel….my gosh! How u revealed it all in the last part. Oh my!! 😱😱😱😱
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m so glad you got afraid kiddo ❤ 😉
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😂😂😂😂😂
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my mouth literally opened at the ending!
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u alright now ri8 ? 😉
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yup i m good
had to drink a little water take a break but good
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ohmy GOD
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🙂
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The braid reminds me of “ek thi dayan” 😛😛😛
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ya kind of now that I think about it 😉
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Hahaha 😝😝
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Exactly!! But what happened to that lady! When is the next part coming ?
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That lady was a ghost, it’s a short fic.
Next wala mat mango, bhoot aa jayega 🤣🤣
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Hahaha..horrors are always my favourite flicks 🤔🤔
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wow …Keep writing
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I intend to 🙂
thanks for reading
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Are there anymore parts to the story?
P.S- Its an interesting read and keeps the reader hooked to the words! Good word Pia 🙂 Keep writing. Cheers! 😀
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wow, thanks a lot dr. but sorry nomore parts, it was a short type spooky fic 🙂
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Was totally unexpected. It sort of creeped me out. You write so well.. 😍
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hehehe thank God you were creeped out, that was my intention 😉
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I lost my braid!
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oh my God 🙂
scary
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Call mulder😂
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Yes I should, he’s an expert 🙂
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Intense work. Spooky!
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yayyy, glad you liked Shruti ❤
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same story….
Actually my nephew is 2 yr old ..
when I’m alone playing with him in evening on the terrace ..
most of the time, he says that he’s seeing ghost 👻.. & acts like Sachi me dikh raha hai ..😒
usse pehle mujhe dar lagta hai 😛
Bhagke aa jata hun me niche😂
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doctr ka no. du ?
lol 😉
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Lol 😛
tum hi rakh lo ..
Tumhe jaada jaroorat hai 😉
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Kyu kyu 😂
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I read all the real
facts about yourself..
guess hai 😜
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Kaha kaha padha yr 😄
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Bhoot na ashol?😂😂
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bhoooooot 😉
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Hahaha…
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Oh my! Lucky to read this in broad daylight.
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oops, raat me padhna ekbar 🙂
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Jeez! 😁
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all the best dr 😉
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🤗🤗❤❤
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That was interesting read. Fiction, right?
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maybe, read it today after 1am ok?
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It’s almost midnight.. Reading such stuff at night scares the hell out of me 😂😂
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try a bit 🙂
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I posted the comment only after reading it 😝 Man! Where do come up witch such twists?
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hehehe I try to keep up writing yar 🙂
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It’s great 🙂
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ouch!! the murder or suicide – next question lol
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keep guessing 😉
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😱😱😱 No i wanna know what happened 😬🤨
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Nah 😂😅🤣
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