Father told me never to go down our old basement, but I wanted to know the noise, which came constantly throughout the night. It kind of sounds like a cat meowing, and I wanted to see the cat so I opened the basement door and tiptoed down a bit.
I didn’t see any cat, as father yanked me out of the basement and yelled at me. Mommy never yelled at me ever before, and it made me cry. Then father told me never to go down there, ever and gave me a cookie.
That made me feel better, so I didn’t ask him why the girl in the basement was making noises like a cat, or why she had no hands and feet with blood flowing from eyes like tears.
A great piece of writing! You freaked me out with only a few words…Words have the power to do that! 😉
I’m new to blogging and I’d really appreciate if you could take a look at my blog and the three posts that I’ve uploaded yet.
https://fictivefinesseff.wordpress.com/
And the latest post, The Dark Alley, was my first shot at writing a short story so I’d gladly welcome some constructive feedback or suggestions.
Happy reading! 🙂
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Do not be afraid 😉
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Wow! Spooky
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Thank you dr, I wanted it that way 🙂 ❤
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Nice story- chilling, well narrated! Following you on insta. Keep an eye out for my next post, trying out fiction too!
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Great writing skills
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I try to keep up, thanks for reading Disa 🙂
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Hey Pia – this probably won’t be the first time for you, but when it came time to nominate your site came to mind: https://paulkardos.com/2018/05/01/from-today-on-i-will-include-the-words-multiple-award-winner-when-introducing-myself-to-others/
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m really happy by the explanation you gave Paul, thanks for the nomination, I will post it soon 🙂
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That’s an amazing piece of writing I’ve read so far!
Hope you have a great day 🙂
I’d really appreciif you have a look at few of my stories, too!
Check ’em on http://www.thehonestfabler.com
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Thanks Ashu, checking ri8 now 🙂
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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followed you on insta 🙂
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Beautiful piece of writing
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Woah thats creepy! I liked how short but scary it is! 🙂
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thanks hon, that’s what I was going for ❤ ❤ ❤
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Quite a lot of mystery in the beginning. Climax made me skip a heartbeat. Nightmarish!
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thanks Saumya, yahi to chahiye tha 😉 ❤
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thats dark dude!!!
ANYWAYS!
I nominated u for quill commander award. there u go:
https://writingpoetry53260872.wordpress.com/2018/03/02/quill-commander-award/
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hehehehe thanks swetie ❤
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Whoaaaa I loved itt!!
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And I love those who love my posts.
Thanks a lot sweetie ❤️
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I love creepy stories. I’m so long-winded most of the time, I’m always impressed when someone gets that creepy affect in such a short story.
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Aww, thanks a lot dr 😊😋😋
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Yikes! That was creepy.
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Yayy, my work is done 😊😅😋
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Good one. 👌👍🏻
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Puts me in mind for Halloween! I love it and I am creeped out by it! Very very good!
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Thanks a lot
You can read my series too
Hope they creep you out again 😉 🙂 🙂
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Will do!
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